"My Dream Job" 'Final Draft'

     A job can be simply defined as a regular activity performed in exchange for payment. I believe that today you have to be extremely gifted at a job in order to be able to stay with it your entire working career. Nowadays many people are move from job to job seeking stability in their lives. Almost everyone enters the work force to try and provide whatever they can for their family. My dream job is to become a teacher.

     I come from a long line of teachers, my great grandmother, my grandmother, father, older sister, and soon my older brother. Also I want to be a teacher. It’s my dream to make a difference in people’s lives at an early age where it will impact the rest of their lives. If I teach a child who goes on to be a lawyer, doctor, engineer, and professional football player and they can still remember me, I will be proud. I want to be able to share my knowledge with kids who more than deserve the best education they could possibly receive. A teacher’s job is very interesting, but at the same time is very difficult. Teaching is a multi-faceted profession and because of this, there are a lot of advantages and disadvantages of being a teacher.

    On the one hand; to be a teacher is a great honor. The teacher is a manufacturer of generations in any country and at any time. He/she helps students to know life. He/she opens the door to unknown worlds. A teacher is like a friend or adviser of students, who shows or advises the students how to learn or to do something. Also, teaching could be an interesting job. Teachers always meet and communicate with interesting people. Sometimes a teacher can go to abroad and see how foreign students learning, so he/she has a chance to see a world and to meet other people. Teachers can organize excursions with students to visit some interesting places in their country or other countries. In addition that teacher can have a lot of children. All his/her students can be like his/her own children. It is good for a teacher especially if he/she has not got his/her own family and children. Then his/her students are a family for him/her and teacher does not feel             lonely.

      On the other hand, teaching can be a complex job. The teacher not only has to teach students, but he/she is expected to be a friend to them. He/she should be interested in the students’ world: their problems, fashions, views to life and enjoyments. Also, a teacher has not much free time for his/her family, he/she forgets his/her own children, he/she has to work not only at school but at home too, a teacher’s pay is not very big. So a teacher has not much free time for himself/herself and his/her family. Teachers spend a lot of time at school and even they have to work at home: to make lesson plans, to do all those reports about theirclasses .                                                         

        Thus, I was probably born with a white board marker in hand, my dream of becoming a teacher doesn’t have to do with the fact I have come from generations and generations of teachers. It has to do with the fact that I couldn’t see myself being happy doing anything else. I honestly believe that God has pointed me in the direction of teaching so teaching is my passion and my dream.                    

My DREAM Job "First Draft"

      

     A job can be simply defined as a regular activity performed in exchange for payment. I believe that today you have to be extremely gifted at a job in order to be able to stay with it your entire working career. Nowadays many people are move from job to job seeking stability in their lives. Almost everyone enters the work force to try and provide whatever they can for their family. My dream job is to become a teacher.

      I come from a long line of teachers, my great grandmother, my grandmother, father, older sister, and soon my older brother. Also I want to be a teacher. It’s my dream to make a difference in people’s lives at an early age where it will impact the rest of their lives. If I teach a child who goes on to be a lawyer, doctor, engineer, and professional football player and they can still remember me, I will be proud. I want to be able to share my knowledge with kids who more than deserve the best education they could possibly receive. A teacher’s job is very interesting, but at the same time is very difficult. Teaching is a multi-faceted profession and because of this, there are a lot of advantages and disadvantages of being a teacher.

    On the one hand; to be a teacher is a great honor. The teacher is a manufacturer of generations in any country and at any time. He/she helps students to know life. He/she opens the door to unknown worlds. A teacher is like a friend or adviser of students, who shows or advises the students how to learn or to do something. Also, teaching could be an interesting job. Teachers always meet and communicate with interesting people. Sometimes a teacher can go to abroad and see how foreign students learning, so he/she has a chance to see a world and to meet other people. Teachers can organize excursions with students to visit some interesting places in their country or other countries. In addition that teacher can have a lot of children. All his/her students can be like his/her own children. It is good for a teacher especially if he/she has not got his/her own family and children. Then his/her students are a family for him/her and teacher does not feel lonely.
       On the other hand, teaching can be a complex job. The teacher not only has to teach students, but he/she is expected to be a friend to them. He/she should be interested in the students’ world: their problems, fashions, views to life and enjoyments. Also, a teacher has not much free time for his/her family, he/she forgets his/her own children, he/she has to work not only at school but at home too, a teacher’s pay is not very big. So a teacher has not much free time for himself/herself and his/her family. Teachers spend a lot of time at school and even they have to work at home: to make lesson plans, to do all those reports about their classes .

  

    Thus, I was probably born with a white board marker in hand, my dream of becoming a teacher doesn’t have to do with the fact I have come from generations and generations of teachers. It has to do with the fact that I couldn’t see myself being happy doing anything else. I honestly believe that God has pointed me in the direction of teaching so teaching is my passion and my dream.

My DREAM Job "Out Line"

My dream job is a teacher

-what is my dream job?

-why is it my dream job?

-What are the advantages of this job?

-what are the disadvantages of this job?

-How can I be a good teacher?

The Education system in Egypt "Final Draft"

Eid Adha Mubarak

The education system is a mirror in any society that reflects the culture. Education is the basis of progress in any country whereby it is a measure of progress and civilization. There are a number of similarities among educational systems in all countries e.g. student, teacher, books and blackboards, but the way of using them is different. In Egypt, there are a lot of problems which faced educational system. It becomes as punishment.  When Child has a six year, he is punished by going to school and graduate to face other punishments                     

      On the one hand, the first educational problem of public schools is the large school size and student population. On an average, most public schools are twice the size of private schools, so millions of student didn't benefit from curriculum. Another educational problem of public schools is higher rate of violence and student dropout. There are many students who might threaten their classmates. They might use abusive language and dominate them physically or mentally.  In addition that, the curriculum is only depending on memorizing and learning by heart. Also it's very difficult to be understood and isn't connected with society and age. Also the examinations aren`t connected with the objectives of curriculum. In addition that, the deterioration of relations between teacher and students.  Now private lessons became a major source of income to the teacher that lead to the disappearance of the image of the model teacher.Also schools are on the verge of collapse. A lot of schools without windows, roofs and water closets.

     According to the above mentioned; high education isn't useful for students because of lack of facilities. Poverty of the educational system in Egyptian universities doesn't help for scientific researches and creativity .The curriculum in university doesn't connect with scientific progress but depend on memorizing.

       On the other hand, educational system needs a lot of modifications .First; the number of student should be decreased. Second; schools can prevent violence by providing security to some extent. Third; curriculum should be connected with the needs of society by changing the elements of educational process and reformation it in a scientifically way.  Also, examination should connect with the objectives of curriculum .Also it shouldn't only depend on memorizing but understanding. Fourth, school building should be developed and restoration. Finally, government should spend more money on scientific researches and encourage creative students to improve their abilities.

     Thus, improving the educational system isn't the responsibility of government alone as all members of society should be involved in the improvement process.  As it's our future which we should do our best to make it better as we can.        

"The Educational System" First draft

       The education system is a mirror in any society that reflects the culture. Education is the basis of progress in any country whereby it is a measure of progress and civilization. There are a number of similarities among educational systems in all countries e.g. student, teacher, books and blackboards, but the way of using them is different. In Egypt, there are a lot of problems which faced educational system. It becomes as punishment.  When Child has a six year, he is punished by going to school and graduate to face other punishments                      

      On the one hand, the first educational problem of public schools is the large school size and student population. On an average, most public schools are twice the size of private schools, so millions of student didn't benefit from curriculum. Another educational problem of public schools is higher rate of violence and student dropout. There are many students who might threaten their classmates. They might use abusive language and dominate them physically or mentally.  In addition that, the curriculum is only depending on memorizing and learning by heart. Also it's very difficult to be understood and isn't connected with society and age. Also the examinations aren`t connected with the objectives of curriculum. In addition that, the deterioration of relations between teacher and students.  Now private lessons became a major source of income to the teacher that lead to the disappearance of the image of the model teacher.Also schools are on the verge of collapse. A lot of schools without windows, roofs and water closets.

     According to the above mentioned; high education isn't useful for students because of lack of facilities. Poverty of the educational system in Egyptian universities doesn't help for scientific researches and creativity .The curriculum in university doesn't connect with scientific progress but depend on memorizing.

       On the other hand, educational system needs a lot of modifications .First; the number of student should be decreased. Second; schools can prevent violence by providing security to some extent. Third; curriculum should be connected with the needs of society by changing the elements of educational process and reformation it in a scientifically way.  Also, examination should connect with the objectives of curriculum .Also it shouldn't only depend on memorizing but understanding. Fourth, school building should be developed and restoration. Finally, government should spend more money on scientific researches and encourage creative students to improve their abilities.

     Thus, improving the educational system isn't the responsibility of government alone as all members of society should be involved in the improvement process.  As it's our future which we should do our best to make it better as we can.        

                    

Introduction:

1-what is the meaning of education

What is the importance of the education?

BODY

·        What are the disadvantages and problems of the educational system in Egypt?

·        Who is the responsible for these problems?
Conclusion:

·        How can we solve these problems?

organ transportation"Final Draft"

Organs transportation is the process of   removing an organ or tissue from one person (the organs donor) and placing it into another person (the recipient). This may be done when your organ has stopped working or stopped working well because of disease or injury. Not all organs can be transplanted. Organs and tissues that can be transplanted include Liver, Kidney, Pancreas, Heart, Lung, Intestine Cornea, Middle ear, Skin, Bone, Bone marrow, Heart valves and Connective tissue. Not everyone is a good candidate for an organ transplant. You probably are not a good candidate if you have an infection, heart disease that is not under control, a drug or alcohol problem, or another serious health problem. Organs transportation has supporting and opposing views.

      On the one hand; organs transportation has many advantages. Organs donation is a lifesaving gift to a person who needs a healthy organ. One organs donor can save up to 8 lives by donating their heart, lungs, liver, kidney, pancreas, and intestines. Most of the patients organs got very bad disease, and the medicine can't control their bad organs, for example, cancer, the heart disease and kidney disease; etc. the only way to recover is getting another organ to do the transplantation as soon as possible. Also organs transplants is  the ways to increase the number of organs available for transplant and thus reduce the number of patients who die every day waiting for a new heart, liver, or kidney.

       Religious beliefs that there isn't any evidence on sanctity and proscriptions of organ transportation. The prophet Mohamed said that man should love for the other what he loves for himself. So, people should know that organ transportation is a kind of charity for them after their death and a way of saving other's lives.

   On the other hand, there are some people who refuse organs transportation. The surgery and the loss of an organ or tissue do carry potential risks for the donor Payment for organ donation could lead to a black market for human organs. Also religious beliefs in the sanctity of the body and proscriptions against body mutilation. Man doesn't have the right to sale his body because Allah is the owner of this body. Also Islam said that no one has the right to cut any part of a dead man because sanctity of the body.  In addition that the language of "gifts" , "donations", " heroic rescues" and "saving lives" are masks for illegal practices are used to obtain the desired of organ sale.

            I think organs donation is not forbidden but organs sale is forbidden .man can donate with his organ without having any money. Also organs donation must have some rules. Firstly; the organ which the man donates must be organ that man can life without it such as kidney .secondly; these organs must not cause body mutilation. In addition to the above mention; government must makes rules to control on organs transportation.

     Thus, I want to tell people that don't take your organs to Heaven, Heaven knows we need them here".

"Organs Transportation" First Draft"

    

    

    Organs transportation is the process of   removing an organ or tissue from one person (the organs donor) and placing it into another person (the recipient)  . This may be done when your organ has stopped working or stopped working well because of disease or injury. Not all organs can be transplanted. Organs and tissues that can be transplanted include Liver, Kidney, Pancreas, Heart, Lung, Intestine Cornea, Middle ear, Skin, Bone, Bone marrow, Heart valves and Connective tissue. Not everyone is a good candidate for an organ transplant. You probably are not a good candidate if you have an infection, heart disease that is not under control, a drug or alcohol problem, or another serious health problem. Organs transportation have supporting and opposing.

      On the one hand; organs transportation have many advantages. Organs donation is a lifesaving gift to a person who needs a healthy organ. One organs donor can save up to 8 lives by donating their heart, lungs, liver, kidney, pancreas, and intestines. Most of the patients organs got very bad disease, and the medicine can't control their bad organs, for example, cancer, the heart disease and kidney disease; etc.only way to recover is getting another organ to do the transplantation as soon as possibleAlso organs Transplants is the ways to increase the number of organs available for transplant and thus reduce the number of patients who die every day waiting for a new heart, liver, or kidney.

      Religious beliefs that there isn't any evidence on sanctity and proscriptionsof organ transportation. The prophet Mohamed said that man should love for the other what he loves for himself.so, people should know that organ transportation is a kind of charity for them after their death and a way of saving other's lives.

   On the other hand, there are some people who oppose organs transportation. The surgery and the loss of an organ or tissue do carry potential risks for the donorPayment for organ donation could lead to a black market for human organs. Also religious beliefs in the sanctity of the body and proscriptions against body mutilation. Man doesn't have the right to sale his body because Allah is the owner of this body.  In addition that the language of "gifts" , "donations", " heroic rescues" and "saving lives" are masks for illegal practices are used to obtain the desired of organ sale.

     In my opinion; I think organs donation is not forbidden but organs sale is forbidden .man can donate with his organ without having any money. Also organs donation must have some rules. Firstly;the organ which the man donates must be organ that man can life without it such askidney .secondlythese organs must not cause body mutilation. In addition to the above mention; government must makes rules to control on organs transportation.

     Thus, I want to tell people that don't take your organs to Heaven, Heaven knows we need them here"  .

organ transportation out line

Introduction:

1- What is organ transportation and transplantation?

2-What are organs and tissues can be transplanted?

Body:

A-

1-What are the supporting views?

2-what are the evidences of supporting views?

B-

1-What are the opposing views?

2-what are the evidences of opposing views

Conclusion:

1-My opinion about organ transportation

2-How can we avoid its disadvantages?



Air Pollution " Final Draft"

Air pollution is actually the addition of any harmful
substances to the atmosphere, which causes the damaging of the environment, human health and the quality of life. The fast increase in air pollution in Egypt has become a real threat to the people’s health. There are many causes and effects of air pollution.

            Firstly, there are several causes of air pollution. With the development in industry, came along the increase in air pollution, which occurs inside homes, schools, offices even in the countryside. Carbon dioxide is one of the main pollutants that cause air pollution. This is because, although living beings do exhale carbon dioxide, this gas is harmful when emitted from other sources, which are caused due to human activity. Carbon dioxide gas is used in various industries such as the oil industry and the chemical industry. The manufacturing process of most products would require the use of this gas. Causes of air pollution are not limited to this, the combustion of fuels in automobiles, jet planes; etc all cause the release of several primary pollutants into the air. The burning of fossil fuels in big cities which is seen at most factories, offices and even a large number of homes, it is no wonder that air pollution is increasing at an alarming rate .Also increasing number of power plants and manufacturing units or industries that mostly have activities related to the burning of fuels. Besides,  marine vessels, activities that involve the burning of wood, military activities that involve the use of nuclear weapons, all are the numerous causes of air pollution. These and a number of other dangerous air pollutants are emitted with the various numbers of activities that we carry out during the day which are the main causes of air pollution.

       Secondly; air pollution has a dangerous effect on our life. Consequently there has been an increase in the death rates resulting from various diseases caused by air pollution varying from breathing problem s to lung cancer. Air pollution does not only affect people but it also damages the whole ecological system in which plants and animals are harmed as well. also it affects the earth's atmosphere as it lets in more harmful radiation from the sun.  That is why there is a global rise in temperature which scientists refer to as "global warming". As a result of this rise in temperature the world food supply and sea level will be affected. Also we have acid rain.

 Acid rain is rain that is more acidic than normal. Acid rain is a complicated problem. Primarily caused by air pollution, acid rain's spread and damage involves weather,, soil, and the life cycles of plants and animals on the land and in lakes. Scientists have discovered that air pollution from the burning of fossil fuels is the major cause of acid rain. Power plants and factories burn coal and oil. Power plants use that coal and oil to produce the electricity for our homes and to run our electric appliances. We also burn natural gas, coal, and oil to heat our homes.

     Finally, how can we solve this problem?.We should increase awareness among the people, the government and businesses. We have to make the environmental protection and restoration a national priority. We are seeking the cooperation of all segments of Egyptian society, the business, the government, the mothers and housewives, the students, the artists and all the professionals inside and outside Egypt to protect ourselves and our county.

          Thus, earth is everybody's home and nobody likes living in a dirty home. Together, we can make the earth a cleaner, healthier and more pleasant place to live.