Organs transportation is the process of removing an organ or tissue from one person (the organs donor) and placing it into another person (the recipient) . This may be done when your organ has stopped working or stopped working well because of disease or injury. Not all organs can be transplanted. Organs and tissues that can be transplanted include Liver, Kidney, Pancreas, Heart, Lung, Intestine Cornea, Middle ear, Skin, Bone, Bone marrow, Heart valves and Connective tissue. Not everyone is a good candidate for an organ transplant. You probably are not a good candidate if you have an infection, heart disease that is not under control, a drug or alcohol problem, or another serious health problem. Organs transportation have supporting and opposing.
On the one hand; organs transportation have many advantages. Organs donation is a lifesaving gift to a person who needs a healthy organ. One organs donor can save up to 8 lives by donating their heart, lungs, liver, kidney, pancreas, and intestines. Most of the patients organs got very bad disease, and the medicine can't control their bad organs, for example, cancer, the heart disease and kidney disease; etc.only way to recover is getting another organ to do the transplantation as soon as possibleAlso organs Transplants is the ways to increase the number of organs available for transplant and thus reduce the number of patients who die every day waiting for a new heart, liver, or kidney.
Religious beliefs that there isn't any evidence on sanctity and proscriptionsof organ transportation. The prophet Mohamed said that man should love for the other what he loves for himself.so, people should know that organ transportation is a kind of charity for them after their death and a way of saving other's lives.
On the other hand, there are some people who oppose organs transportation. The surgery and the loss of an organ or tissue do carry potential risks for the donorPayment for organ donation could lead to a black market for human organs. Also religious beliefs in the sanctity of the body and proscriptions against body mutilation. Man doesn't have the right to sale his body because Allah is the owner of this body. In addition that the language of "gifts" , "donations", " heroic rescues" and "saving lives" are masks for illegal practices are used to obtain the desired of organ sale.
In my opinion; I think organs donation is not forbidden but organs sale is forbidden .man can donate with his organ without having any money. Also organs donation must have some rules. Firstly;the organ which the man donates must be organ that man can life without it such askidney .secondlythese organs must not cause body mutilation. In addition to the above mention; government must makes rules to control on organs transportation.
Thus, I want to tell people that don't take your organs to Heaven, Heaven knows we need them here" .
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ردحذف1. Organs transportation have supporting and opposing (views).
2. organs transportation have (has) many advantages.
3. (the)only way to recover is getting
4. organs Transplants is (are) the ways
5. I like the use of religious evidences to support your point of view
6. On the other hand, there are some people who (refuse) oppose organs transportation